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Burning Paper

Charred edges
Slowly curl inward,
Like a hand closing into a fist.
Flames bounce
Briefly as they encroach
Upon the last remaining
Shred.

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  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:23:00 PM

    Congrats on a well written descripitve win!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 5:28:00 PM

    wow, this is REALLY showing and not telling. Awesome description. wEll deserved win

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win Katie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:10:00 PM

    Thank you all for your comments!! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it! :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 8:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win with this entry. This is a very descriptive write describing how a sheet of paper burns.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:44:00 AM

    lovely write Katie, congratulations on your win. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 8:31:00 AM

    This is outstanding, Katie..this is my first read of your also..This means there is much more beautiful poetry of yours to be discovered..Was this a revenge burn? I can only wonder...Congrats to you...A hearty welcome to the Soup. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Beautifully depicted Katie. Congratulations

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 7:25:00 AM

    congrats Katie on a super first place win .. great imagery luv..

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 8:51:00 PM

    Nice write Katie enjoyed reading your work and thanks for sharing . Declan