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Concrete-Cross-Our Father

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+  Hello, Concrete form is usually takes the objects, it's describing and I saw it from EWTN Catalog., I just tried but the outcome is bad because I turned it into the contest so we know this one will not win
 
http://poets.com/jacqueline-mendoza--57/concrete-form-our-father
 
but I can put it here... for u to see  the actual look
 
Our Father,
Who art
In Heaven,
Hallowed be
Thy Name.
Your kingdom come,Your will be done on Earth as it is in Heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our trespasses,
as we
forgive those
Who trespass
Against us.
And lead
Us not
Into temptation,
But deliver
Us from
Evil. Amen.
 
 
 
 
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Concrete-Cross-Our Father

 UNSUPPORTED CODE 
Who art
In Heaven,
Hallowed be
Thy Name.
Your kingdom come,Your will be done on Earth as it is in Heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our trespasses, 
as we 
forgive those 
Who trespass
Against us.
And lead 
Us not 
Into temptation,
But deliver 
Us from 

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  1. Date: 12/18/2011 8:41:00 PM
    Check out "About this poem" to see, thanks