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Wizard The break in

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Wizard The break in

I was awake, but laid there on my pillow. 
The silence was so loud it muffled me.
Fear draped me in the house where I dwell.
The anguish, I just couldn’t deny.
I heard a strange sound coming from my kitchen,
Feet were slipping on the wet floor.
I also heard the sound of the trap made of old foil,
I thought, “Just stand on the edge!”
 Then, there was a very long pause…

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  1. Date: 12/18/2011 6:17:00 PM
    Very nice entry. Wishing you many wins here on the soup. Always Michael

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/18/2011 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;-) thank you Michael. wishing you the same.
  1. Date: 12/18/2011 1:06:00 PM
    Well done all ten , enjoyed it x

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/18/2011 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy..entered a contest with it, hope ill win