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Hesitating Ladies

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Hesitating Ladies

INTRO:
Its not always easy
Stumble into a party,where the ladies are stiff
Especially if they belong to the higher circles of society
This guy ended up in Acrostic

Tango dancer..and a wild one he is
Revealing his dance infront of the shocked ladies
Unexpected,showing off his virility
The stiff party of madams are furious and upset
He is not welcomed into their world..a wild one he is

Hesitating to give him recognition..they are careful not to applauding his dance
Under the table..he wiggle his toes
Rumours says..he even "toe tickles " some of them between their thighs
Terrifying things start happening
Soaking wet..after drinks and nice coctails being thrown into his face..party is over



My first attempt at writing Acrostic...bit scary,its such a unusual way for me to write:)
Have a nice weekend my friends out there!

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:48:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS ARLID,, on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:04:00 PM
    Hello Arlid, WRY??? Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Nice seeing your poem on the front page... always~ Linda....

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:10:00 PM
    Hello Arlid,,, stopping by to view this poem once again.... :-) I would like to see a haiku from you...LOL... i know I know... you are not into them... especially with all that horse (r@p flying around...LOL... hugs...PD

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:02:00 PM
    I actually enjoyed your first attempt at the Acrostic Arild.. I really enjoy this form.. Hope your doing great and are having an awesome weekend.. love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 12:38:00 AM
    Good job, I love to write in acrostic, it takes the difficulty level way up. Well done.

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 4:43:00 PM
    who was worse him or you hahaha

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 1/13/2012 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Im too much of a teddybear..I`ll leave it to the dango dancer haha:)
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 10:23:00 PM
    haha, I finally read what you said about "iset"!!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 7:51:00 PM
    Yes!! It's WHERE! You got it!! Cool! I am so sorry I took so long to get back with ya! English is hard enough for me as well! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 10:38:00 AM
    Great write. Well done. Fun to read.

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 6:23:00 PM
    LOl,,, I'm impressed with your Acrostic.. Did any one bring any napkins.. poor guy... an excited write my friend,, Thank you for stopping by my work the other day.... I' actually took the day off from my Stinky restaurant... Have a nice one..looking forward to ringing in the new year here on the soup... God Bless,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 12:42:00 PM
    Interesting person of whom you speak..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 1:56:00 PM
    You are having WAY TOO much fun with this first acrostic. ha ha. Keep on a writin'. Merry Christmas. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 11:54:00 AM
    I did find this funny. Not sure what Acrostic is...?? I'm assuming a form of poetry so I'll look it up. Truth Hurts I see...Thanks for sharing this...it's a nice poem.

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 2:53:00 AM
    What a delightful poem. An Acrostic can be difficult to write. Thanks for such a delightful read. Thanks for your comment on my "NewOrleans" poem. Take care, JancarlC.

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 8:13:00 PM
    What a great poem Arlid, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 10:42:00 PM
    HOw humerous this was when it got to the part under the table. Good job. But can you tell me what the first stanza spells out with the word Iset?

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 12/17/2011 3:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..that was only ment as a intro part,not a stanza:) But thinking about it,"Iset" in norwegian can mean ìcy`on english..he`s on thin ice that guy:) Thanks for commenting.Arild
  1. Date: 12/16/2011 3:37:00 PM
    It works for me Arild, excellent poem, interesting subject also. harry

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 3:36:00 PM
    You did good Arild, you did good, thank you for your comments, hugs vie

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 11:57:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Arild. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 11:40:00 AM
    Well, I still don't know what an acrostic is but the poem is great. Instead of "virtuality" I think it should be "virility". He sounds like a guy who knows how to get into trouble. but being a man he gets away with it. Love it Arild, bad boys are fun! :)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 12/16/2011 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok..I "fixed" it for you my dear Lizzie:) I didn`t notice that before you said it! Its my Nor-Lish playing my a mind game again..lol.Thanks for your always lovely comments,and for stopping by.Take Care Liz