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Pattern of love


Your naked feet left a pattern of love
From the bathroom to our bed
Embellished in my mind.


for Chris's contest.


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  1. Date: 12/26/2011 1:56:00 PM

    Enjoyed your kimo, David. Congrats on your win! kim

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 11:44:00 PM

    This leaves a lot to the imagination. Fine write, and congratulations on winning with it.

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 3:29:00 AM

    Like this. Congraulations David x

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 9:37:00 PM

    : ) Love this David. Congratulations on your win in Chris's Contest! Wishing you and your family a joyful Christmas and a happy New Year! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 6:17:00 AM

    Loved this one! Congratulations, David, on your win in Chris' contest! Merry Christmas! Catie :)

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 7:14:00 PM

    DAvid, I would have scored this one near the top. I loved it. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 2:58:00 PM

    Love the imagery David ;) congratulations on your win.. yep you will see many changes to my pic, I am fickle like that ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 2:54:00 PM

    Imagery is so strong here...there is no greater way to write that last line! ... Why OF COURSE I WILL try and write something for your contest! Best of luck in it and if you need anything,....Soup ME! Blessings, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 2:21:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Davie

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 11:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Chris D. Aechtner "Kimo" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 10:45:00 AM

    David, this is a very romantic Kimo - enjoyable to read. Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas and blessings towards a prosperous New Year!

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 10:45:00 AM

    Oh ! wonderful sensuous write....u did in three lines...cheers David !!!! all the best...

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 9:32:00 PM

    It's open secret, worded so nicely that can be felt with Love. Nice to meet you my friend. God bless us all. bl

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 5:45:00 PM

    Love this David! Nice one...Chris is sure to love it! I'm excited for your 1st contest-you'll do just fine....don't worry :)

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 2:24:00 PM

    nice verse!!! gotta love those soft splush rugs! Just soup mail me questions and I'll be gald to help you through your 1st contest [just not the judging part ;)] Happy Holy Days Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 1:28:00 PM

    soupmail! wonderful kimo. Enjoyed@ best wishes in the contest. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 12:20:00 PM

    SWEET LOVE,SWEET LOVE................. OXOX Hugs from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 7:50:00 PM

    I know that scenario! Good one : )

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 9:59:00 PM

    This one is really nice. For sure,Chris has got to like it!

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 5:01:00 AM

    excellent Kimo, good luck in contest. harry

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 3:41:00 AM

    Oh David that is so romantic! X Lizzie