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The Stranger

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The Stranger

Broken tears is where it all begins, the love has lifted for now a mist in the air. Tears fall upon and evaporate into love fog. Yours eyes became cold lacking compassion, unresponsive with those shallow stares. Stranger in your heart never knew the love we shared shall ever fall apart. Never would have I thought I would be an absence of your heart. To take a journey into your scorned mind, and really see how your feeling inside. Your eyes tells me a story of all your lost, even all of your lies. Your soul has begun to die. Yours cry suffer to inflict pain and torture. Tears began to burn and endure to enflame your pillows at night, intense dislike. No one is there to kiss, and hold tight behold your over night burial site. Leaveing you in a slumber your heart is slaughtered, savagely murdered. Yearning to once again become a slave, owned by another. Laughter is what you miss, going through withdraw from my kiss. Watching me from doorways is harder to resists. Remember me? It's the stranger you set a side, but now miss. Broken bliss pitiful, pathetic promises. Petty pleasures emptiness whispers, words that leaves blisters. Cutting deeper than any scissors. Tears over flowing deeper than any river. Symbolism repesentation of broken mirrors. Termination limits of love, I perish from existence. French kisses of death, hollow sunken indented last breath. Losing your voice likely to result in defeat, as you couldn't began to speak. Grief over becomes you difficulty, grasping for a glimpse of me. Shattered love we mastered, you discover no longer your partner. Forever thee foreigner you disclaimer... So therefore you became... The Stranger.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 3:39:00 PM

    Very deep..an emotional write here...looks can be deceiving, but from what I see, I can't imagine anyone breaking your heart!!..hugs

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha Date: 5/18/2012 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Im glad you like, this is my favorite poem i ever written...I love when another can feel what i feel through my words...breath taking. :)
  1. Date: 12/26/2011 1:44:00 PM

    Smile ˜ I wished to return unto this soul stirring and profoundly spoken unto reflectives verse ˜ My dear precious & beautiful Twanna ˜ It seems to be as a weaved in tapestries moments of both in and out; self, and one or many others ˜ Perhaps the essence of it all calls for the readers to search deeply inside and even beyound their deepest hearts ˜ To gaze into the mirrors truth inside they and grasp, something eternal and past the doorways of just here and now * Perhaps even the honest & sincere museful image in regards again, unto oneself ˜ I love it because I love the voice found beyound the graves of empty & shallow ˜ I hope that You had a beautiful Christmas * My love to You always, John!:) ˜

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha Date: 5/18/2012 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aww thanks John..i never seen this comment till now...so im very sorry for responding so late..please forgive me...I so happy that you were able to go that deep within your self to see where i was coming from...thank you once again.
  1. Date: 12/21/2011 5:01:00 AM

    WOW! WHAT A CUTE WELL PENNED WORK. ALSO THANKS FOR STOPING BY TO READ MY NAIVE WORK, I APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENT AND HOPE TO BE LIKE YOU IN PEN. LOVE, ADELAJA

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha Date: 12/23/2011 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow! Thank you Adelaja...i was scared no one would understand where i was coming from with this poem but i know now only a true poet will..after i wrote i cried..i truly believe this is my best poem and my deepest also my favorite..you would have to go through this to truly understand from the man point of view and mines :)
  1. Date: 12/14/2011 7:09:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Very deep and well written verse my friend 8 Keep brushing through it ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha Date: 12/20/2011 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you John
  1. Date: 12/14/2011 6:30:00 PM

    1st of all you don't want this formated like this..make grouping by topic like paragraphs i will try to show you in soup mail but this is so long it may take 2 soup mails! :)