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When You Leave Me

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Below is the poem entitled When You Leave Me which was written by poet Genevieve Farese. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When You Leave Me

If you never come back to me, if you break your promise, if you cause my demise. Will you just leave me be, or my pain will you refuse to see? Won`t you give me one last kiss, a parting with at least a fleeting bliss? A lasting memory, may it be. I`ll weep every night, Thinking where did I go wrong. I`ll stare at the sky, Wishing I was holding you tight. I`ll keep my heart strong, it's breaking apart, I`d almost die.

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  1. Date: 12/15/2011 5:42:00 AM
    G.F.- Though i have never tried an Italian sonnet, yours lays out the pangs of love lost. Glad to hear that the writer is still amoungst the living. ;-)

    Farese Avatar Genevieve Farese
    Date: 12/16/2011 1:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha :) True. First time doin an Italian Sonnet too. I dont even know if its right ;P And yes, I`m still living.