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Arabian Mist

"The Arabian Nights"

Underneath the oceans veil.
Mystery lies within.
Beyond Orion's belt, I shift my mind to sail.
Within me, every constellations hides secrets of sin.

Allowing me, to time frame the world of yesterday.
I found portals with no way-out.
Covering every bruise that my body had on display.
Drawing along the mist of no doubt!

I tie eternity into loopholes with no ending.
Singing a song that lacks the strength to be strong.
Trying hard to swallow words that have no mending.
Babbling at my tongue, when one's heart is wrong.

I hide in the light, away from the darken mist.
A sprint sensation lurking down-under. 
Anthologies written only to exist. 
A place that strikes louder than thunder.

Eyes that port and slow everything down.
Mysteries behind, a deadly desert storm.
Slaving under the 3rd crown.
Candlelight's guiding a new wedding form.

Executed in a thousand tales, of romance.
Knocking at my door ending another dream.
A sensual marriage with regrets, and loss of chance.
Dancing streams with no means.

Avalon, closing over an Arabic Night.
A story cradling me in bed.
By morning dawn I will no longer see light.
Waking up to another Arabian Night.

.              by;p.d.

NOTE~ I read the book 5 years ago.                  
ABOUT~  "THE ARABIAN NIGHTS." 
the book is Full of mischief, valor, ribaldry, and romance,
plus more.
I based my poem On the Queen,
Who's Husband would kill his new wife after one night of marriage...
Most of my lines are metaphorical, about the mysteries and stories told...

enjoy~~  click about this note

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  1. Date: 2/15/2014 4:06:00 PM

    i read it with your voice in my mind. it makes a difference. it makes you sound like a princess trapped. but that is the original feeling anyway.

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 1:09:00 AM

    Big congrats on your fine win, Pd!!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 12:12:00 PM

    Many congratulations Pd xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 9:36:00 AM

    Congrats on your well deserved win Linda.

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 12:03:00 AM

    IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, linda

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 10:16:00 PM

    Congrads on this beautifully writen piece.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:56:00 PM

    I did enjoy Linda. Congratulations on your no. 1 Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:08:00 PM

    Congrats on a fine win PD

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 2:40:00 PM

    Interpreted well via poem... Great write... Dark Sunshine

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:49:00 AM

    and lifestyle of those peoples - Sumeria, Petra, the Turegs and Assassins have stimulated my imagination - this write leaves me thirsty for a continuation - I accept the invitation to your contest, and your friendship with zeal Linda - I will compose a masterpiece for you my Sphinx - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:43:00 AM

    collaborating with History is always a profitable partnership, and whe He sings to you, seldom can the lesson be ignored - " Mysteries behind a deadly desert storm...- sprint sensation.." very deft metaphors PD. -they say it is best to write what you know about, well, a Queen of poetry should possess a sympathy with a Queen of mortals - I've always been enchanted with Persian/Arabic sensualities although my knowledge of the subject is grossly inadequate my soul is intrigued with the art

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:10:00 AM

    I enjoyed your poem very much, you are very good with words. using them to your own aims, good. heres my website and you can see me on there doing a poetry video, also a deliciously spooky poem called knocking at the door. kind regards carrington

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 6:05:00 PM

    I had about a year or so "vacation" from PS- recently coming back I've read works from old friends... your work has matured to the level of amazing. Your forms, vocabulary, and level of writing has REALLY made a huge impact on me- and as I can see- most everyone else as well. You were always interesting... but when I left you were doing a lot of slams and hilarious stuff. Now- I see seriousness and deep thought. Your commanding of all these new attributes is amazing. You have my awe and respect

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 10:45:00 PM

    I'm sure glad you got a kick out of that one. Did you use many of those slang expressions in the 80's, Irma? YOu would have been just a kid!

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 11:24:00 PM

    Another fine write here. I have just listed you among my favorite poets and I have just sent you soup mail.

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 5:57:00 PM

    A truly beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 2:21:00 AM

    greatly enjoyed this piece of art! thanks for sharing Cara :)

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 11:35:00 AM

    A very interesting and unique write on this poem PD. I have been off the soup for a while with a work term that kept me very busy for a 2 1/2 week stint. I was filling in while they went to Hawaii so the soup got left in the computer. Thank you for my name on your contest and Kash did a wonderful write. Best wishes for 2012. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 7:31:00 PM

    Smile ˜ You know I Am really loving the wonderful depth & quality of Your Beauties poetry as of late ˜ My Dear Precious & Beautiful Linda * I love love & I love metaphores & I do by self & experience know that creation is flawed within many ways & for many reasons ˜ Also, I do not believe that I could say this absolute truth unto Your Treasures enough when I tell You ˜ I think that You Are Amazing & I can somehow feel Your Beauty touching My Soul especially as of recent times ˜ A sign of not only a gifted poetess but also, something very Wonderful * I look forward to seeing Your Priceless Heart during the New Year ˜ 'Sweet Dreams to You * My Love, Always & Forever,'" John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 11:12:00 AM

    I so enjoyed reading this...good poem and a good book you've mentioned.

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 3:12:00 AM

    Hi p.d., I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas time and thank you for your kind comment! I posted poems on facebook as one can add pictures, but now I'm back again on Soup. I know that many of our poet friends are posting on facebook as there had been problems with Soup and amany times ir was impossible to post a poem there. I enjoyed the read of your "Arabian Nights"! Tc and all the best! Have a great start into2012!.....Gert:)

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 5:23:00 AM

    You wrote this in mysterious metaphorical way, P.D. You are awesome :) have a Merriest Christmas, dear. God be with you and your family, P.D. :)

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 10:39:00 PM

    interesting shift an play on words, sounds like a bit 4 the birds if death does come next day.... merry christmas p d ....Don

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 7:31:00 PM

    PD, not only you conveyed the story beautifully, you also managed to create another set of story full of your own mystery. A wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 12:00:00 PM

    I love it. A perfect poem. I have missed a lot while I was away. PD you the best. XXXX

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 10:01:00 PM

    soupmail

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 3:31:00 PM

    Reading this for a second time Poet and it remains beautiful to me. I recieved your message regarding your Gift Exchange Contest and the poet chosen for me. I am thrilled. I will start doing a little research on "him" and I will hopefully create for this wonderful poet a poem he will love.. Thanks.

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 1:55:00 PM

    BEAUTIFUL and very well written - romance of "The Arabian nights" I read the book 3 years ago in my Christmas hollyday. A peaceful Christmas I wish for you and yours famely. - - OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 11:06:00 AM

    wow! who's the fox in the box?TS

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 7:07:00 PM

    I read that as well, your poem fits beautifully with the theme of the book, a job well done!

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