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WAKING IN SAN FRANCISCO

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WAKING IN SAN FRANCISCO

The sun did not rise with me this morning. The cold, grey mist was there Embracing all the places We had been the night before. The music, too, was gone; And emptiness enfolded me Like silent fog On city streets. Were you ever here? Did we sing a song And dance in the moonlight . . . Embrace, laugh, and Hold each other? I cannot find you now.

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:47:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS WILLIAM, on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. Love ~SKAT~

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker
    Date: 9/7/2013 9:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:04:00 PM
    William, , Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Nice seeing your poem on the front page... always~ Linda ....

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:38:00 AM
    YOU DREW A VERY BEAUTIFUL PICTURE IN WORDS

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 2:18:00 AM
    Lovely, very beautifully expressed!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured! I've not read your work before, but I will in the future. This is beautiful - so simple and direct and sad... jack

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:20:00 PM
    A sadness filled my heart for a moment for you I enjoyed reading your poetry . Congrats on your featured poem ! Laura :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 8:54:00 PM
    this definately brings old memories with tears...I understand the pain of separation....wonderful William ..

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker
    Date: 12/20/2011 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Fiery,Of all the memories we hold it is the painful and sad ones that teach us the most in life.I'm glad you understand.Thanksfor the comment. Crossfox
  1. Date: 12/14/2011 7:31:00 AM
    Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season William. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker
    Date: 12/21/2011 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carol,I appreciateyour message and wishes.I;m looking forward to next year and doing more writing. God bless you and your loved ones.