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what makes me happy

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what makes me happy

My happiness,
lies, in my merriment!
My happiness,
lies, in my commitment!

I'm happy,
when in good health; i'm not
lacking!
I'm happy,
when in contest; i'm not losing!

Always happy,
to see the green field ever grow!
Always happy,
to see the blue stream ever flow!

I get happy,
when people see me, as not a 
foe!
I get happy,
when i'm embraced from head 
to
toe!

As happiness treasure!
Comes from one's pleasure!
I reduce my work pressure!
By writing at my leisure!

Always happy,
that most times; i'm always busy!
Always happy,
that; i'm not known to be lazy!

I'm also happy,
when my dad, is in his smiling
mood!
I'm also happy,
when my mum, is serving the
food!

I'm happy,
that my parents, are proud of 
me!
I'm happy,
that you all, also loves me!

For the Carol brown, being 
happy's
contest.

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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:08:00 AM
    Nice poem Aelaja....Lots of excellent reason for happiness here, reading your poem makes me happy :) - Shaz

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 12:40:00 PM
    Cool Job, Aelaja. Congrats on a worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 1:32:00 AM
    Really enjoyed this Congratulations on your win x

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 9:02:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poem, Adelaja. It made me smile. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Congrats on your win. Kim

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 7:06:00 PM
    A good child makes jhappy parents. Love your poem and congratulations on your high placement. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 3:46:00 PM
    what a cute poem. My favorite part, dad in good mood and mom serving the food. Sure to make any child happy when at home with parents. Congrats!

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/20/2011 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lovely you! thanks for lovely comment
  1. Date: 12/19/2011 2:20:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in my "Being Happy" contest Adelaja. I have enjoyed sponsoring contests this year and hope to continue doing it in 2012. Love, Carol

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/19/2011 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WITH GREAT GRATITUTES, IT WELL APPRECIATED. WARM REGARDS TO YOUR FAMILY. LOVE, ADELAJA.
  1. Date: 12/12/2011 11:52:00 PM
    this made me smile and made me happy :) good luck with the contest :D

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/13/2011 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 12/10/2011 10:11:00 PM
    very nice creative write,,,i can relate to being happy,,,thanks for sharing with me....

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/19/2011 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ITS MY PLEASURE! YOU GUYS ARE GREAT!
  1. Date: 12/10/2011 6:14:00 PM
    Simple to read and understand while being decently descriptive. Good write.

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/19/2011 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKSSSSSS!
  1. Date: 12/10/2011 5:14:00 PM
    Yes, you're a guy I can love Adelaja, you make it sound so easy and I think is is naturally a bug part of you!

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/19/2011 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well appreciated!
  1. Date: 12/10/2011 4:15:00 PM
    Great things in your life bring you happiness..Good to know a very outgoing young man..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking the time to comment on my work..It was very uplifting..Sara

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/10/2011 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for the good comment
  1. Date: 12/10/2011 1:38:00 PM
    Really enjoyed your approach to the contest ;) Good luck with your entry ;)

    olayiwola Avatar adelaja olayiwola
    Date: 12/10/2011 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks so well