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A star

Even through this aching

My joy shines on through

Called me a star in a blighted sky

He called me a star, a star

My aching, though small, fades away

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  1. Date: 12/18/2011 1:53:00 PM

    Congratulations J. I like this poem J.Tank you for sharing. OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 6:13:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, J. Kim

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 4:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win J :)

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 1:55:00 AM

    Congratulations x

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 9:40:00 PM

    Wonderful poem, J! Congratulations on your win.

    Dover Avatar J. Dover Date: 12/15/2011 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Debbie!
    Dover Avatar J. Dover Date: 12/15/2011 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops, wrong person ;/
  1. Date: 12/12/2011 5:49:00 PM

    Hey J. you have Free Verse here or you may call it just Verse..Blank verse has meter as well as not having end rhyme and I'm so glad the aching has faded! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 3:03:00 PM

    JD. congrats on your win, great flow to this ..David

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 12:09:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest J. Love, Carol