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These are the things i hate about you

Your smile,
You've been gone for a while.
These are the things i hate about you.
Your laugh,
Inside you cry,
These are the things i hate about you.
And i,
I think you're smart for letting me go,
But i just wanted you to know...
I love you,
I miss your smile,
A tear still sheds from me,
even though its been a while,
 And even though your gone,
Somehow,
I still hear you voice,
Somehow...
And i love you,
I miss your style,
A tear still sheds from me,
Even though its been a while.
And now that your gone,
Somehow,
I still wish you were around,
Somehow...
I miss you...
I miss you!!!

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:58:00 PM

    just a tip I want to tell you,try to use a bit more and diferent words,I know you are young,sometimes less means more I know,this poem would bring tears in peoples eyes if it would be a bt "richer" in expresion.otherwise a good write.

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 5:35:00 AM

    Love ..... and.......hate......Hope love wins over hate. oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 6:18:00 AM

    oh, a heart wrenching poem. Enjoyed! Hugs, Catie :)