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Anticipating this moment

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Anticipating this moment

stockings on the mantle spilling over
with toys from Santa's red sack
proof he got my letter


12/6/11

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:21:00 PM

    Many congrats on your win Susan

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 12:45:00 PM

    : ) I'm smiling, Black Eyed Susan! Congratulations on your fine win. Merry Christmas, happy New Year! Annalise

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:56:00 AM

    susan, how are you doing? Just looking for poems to give comments to. I am all caught up on my comment list and now am going thru winner page again. Joe is coming home today maybe till tuesday or so. I will make spagetti for dinner. YUM

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Cute! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win a fine use of the form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:43:00 AM

    A great write indeed my dear friend and one of my favorite poets, Susan! I extremely love it and the form. I hope, I can write a poem with this form next time. I can feel the extreme happiness in here as Christmas wishes had been granted. Truly, a lovely image! My big congratulations on your well-deserved win! Advance merry merry Christmas. May all your wishes and dreams come true! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:21:00 AM

    Congratulations, Susan, on a very clever win. You sure got it right... very impressive.... Jake

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Susan my friend xx

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:14:00 AM

    I forgot all about this one. I see it is from last Christmas. Glad you won with it, Susan. congratulations. I don't see enough of you over here. Please post some poems, my good friend!!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:59:00 PM

    Awesome piece,Nice presentation....Congrats on your superb win,Susan...

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:20:00 PM

    Susan, Congratulations with your awesome win~ feeling the joy of somewhat :-)~PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:12:00 PM

    Nice :-) win

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 12:21:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "Christmas Stocking Tribute" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 2:14:00 PM

    Susan, yes the anticipation when your a child, such fond memories - very nice poem and congratulations on the win...

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 9:18:00 AM

    "And remeber, even the tiniest envelope is still heavy for an elf!" Thank goodness, yours made it! I love your last line.. Kudos on your victory! <3~ECMc

  1. Date: 12/11/2011 9:05:00 AM

    Nice Susan. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 9:35:00 AM

    short and meaningful... happy holiday, Susan :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 6:12:00 PM

    I think this is marvelously done, Susan. YOu did it short and cute! I made myself late for spin class. Now I gotta fly out the door!!! Still haven't started the judging. maybe not till tomorrow. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 7:11:00 PM

    would barf if didn't know better, namaste~N