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Incomplete

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Incomplete

Through roaming hills, and blistering winds
my spirit lay somewhere between.
Oh someone point him out to me, 
I desire to hear my soul sing

For at first he left, I did not notice
my emotions to mangled in muck
but I feel my heart fall short
and my body just want to give up

I call to him through the wind in the night
but no reply is heard in the breeze.
I shout his name from dawn to dusk
But only a echo replies in the trees

Forgive me! I cry, I desire you now
that my heart is darken and numb.
For I gladly give up this emotionless feast
to live my life wondering the streets
forsaking the world and all of its treats
to live with my spirit as a bum

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  1. Date: 4/15/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Very nice writing, if your soul is "incomplete" , from an outside view your poem is complete with a lot of feelings, metaphors and i like most this " the desire to hear the soul sing'!

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 5:37:00 AM
    awesome write girl. loved the grand finally.