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Her petite impression

Modestly,
the indulger of write
inch by inch
with detail 
augments her veneer...

Supple,
pliant,
and lastingly emerald

Upon the table
his pen and slip
conditionally rest

Upon the bed;

her petite impression, 
his galvanizing kiss






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  1. Date: 12/29/2011 6:46:00 PM
    6"2 vs the average. they are all petite. well maybe most of them depends on how your luck is. "galvanizing kiss"? sounds like a proposal to me and a commentment is warrented. so long freedom.

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 6:28:00 PM
    "his galvanizing kiss" sounds electric, this petite poet enjoyed the write :-)

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 12:26:00 AM
    wow! wow! wonderful~ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful wow!!!;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 9:49:00 AM
    "Galvanizing!" Shazaam! Odds bodkins! Twenty two scidoo! Leapin lizards! I'm out of superlatives. What a stroke of genius. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 7:49:00 PM
    you made my heart fluttered!a beautiful poem James.

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 12:35:00 PM
    So romantic that you have written..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Yes, it took me a while to get to the writing of poetry..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 5:38:00 PM
    I like what Elizabeth called you here: a master of suggestion. She nailed it!

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 7:53:00 PM
    'Pon my soul I delight in this stroke of insight. You're never stale, you never fail to send me flying like a kite! So subtle Robert, you are master of suggestion. Keep it up!

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Wonderful image. A truly charming poem!

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 1:11:00 PM
    * "AHHH, SOOO BEAUTIFUL THE IMPRESSIONS ONE FINDS * GALVANIZED * SHINY & BRIGHT LIKE A BRAND NEW DIME * LOVELY * MY. LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *