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story teller

Tears flow
As the hero
dies slow
in my story

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  1. Date: 12/19/2011 1:19:00 PM
    Interesting format and a very heartfelt Haiku! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 1:14:00 PM
    Thank you all for reading my poem

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 11:48:00 PM
    A very emotional haiku, Maina. I really dig the formatting as well. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest!

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 11:35:00 PM
    I really like this one, Maina. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
    Good story in 4 lines .Congrats Maina on your win.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 4:31:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Maina! Kim

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 1:21:00 PM
    Oh how I can relate to this, Maina! I really like this one.... shucks this is also probably why most of the time I have happier endings to my writes... one can sure get emotionally attached... Super congrats on your win! :D

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 12:39:00 PM
    Wowza Maina! And great job 'thinking outside the box' and actually having the hero die! Are you writing a novel (or reading one)? I'm writing my first and am lovin' it!

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    Date: 12/9/2011 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'd like to read your novel when u finish it
  1. Date: 12/8/2011 12:25:00 PM
    Maina congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 11:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Maina. Love, Carol