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Dance of the Seasons

Dance me through the springtime
To the sound of a twelve string guitar;
Dance me through the terror
When I don't know where you are.
Dance me through the summer
With red roses in your hair;
Take me through the wind and storm
Plant your kisses everywhere.
Dance me through the autumn
Let your body touch my mind;
You are my only lover
And I see you though I'm blind.
Dance me through the winter
When both of us will cry;
And your eyes are filled with sorrow
When we both must say goodbye.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 10:22:00 AM

    wonderful write Elizabeth... enjoyed...

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 5:20:00 PM

    Bittersweet, and utterly charming... again, the structure is impeccable - rhyme, flow and sentiment. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 3:37:00 PM

    Your verses dance off the screen into my own mind, again a finely piece of crafted art.

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 8:10:00 PM

    wow, another amazing one, Elizabeth. I love this kind of theme and so lyrical!

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 9:32:00 PM

    Such a beautiful poem! An you make it all feel so easy when it flows from your pen. brilliant!

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 8:07:00 PM

    Wow you make me wish I was your man, you do. Love it

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 8:53:00 AM

    A happy poem with a sad closing... Aww... You really did make me sad over your last 3 lines..

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 8:27:00 AM

    What a lovely and touching poem Liz, a poet after my own heart for sure. I finally posted my picture, whatcha think?

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 5:40:00 PM

    you are brilliant,,,but then all your poems are,,,touching,,,inspiring,,,and full of love.......thanks for all you do,,,what a masterpiece................

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 1:12:00 PM

    Hello Lizzie..a deeply plaintive write & as i experience it..touching...!

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 8:30:00 AM

    Elizabeth, a delightful, original, airy work of art, nice again! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 11:22:00 PM

    This is another sad write from you, Elizabeth but has a bittersweet tone to it-- I hope you are doing ok...:)

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 9:44:00 PM

    Liz, hope all is well..always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 7:25:00 PM

    Dance of The Seasons, what an apt title! your imagery is simply poetic.

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 3:49:00 PM

    This sings, Liz. As a musician, I like the rhythm and the flow. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 2:55:00 PM

    What a beautiful, tender, but sad piece, Elizabeth. Excellent writing, as usual

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 10:29:00 AM

    You're truly gifted, dear Elizabeth. Yet another masterpiece from you. Keep it up. Tell me, have you heard from Terry Martin lately???

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 8:41:00 AM

    Love the way you have life dancing thru the seasons. A unique write and lovely words. phyl

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 7:41:00 AM

    This a gem elizabeth, such a wonderful poem, excellent. harry

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 7:31:00 AM

    You have written so wonderfully of dance in every spheres of life up to end. Nice, thanks for this one, my friend. bl

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 4:11:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one..Very romantic and passionate work..I am glad that I chose it to read tonight..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 2:42:00 PM

    If parting is such sweet sorrow, your words bridge the gap.........George

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 1:25:00 PM

    I don't know why you say your worried that your muse is drying up. This sure says otherwise. Sorry, no rhyme this time. Oh, whatta know!

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 11:43:00 AM

    a very beautiful piece my dear.....

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 10:55:00 AM

    jimminie, lizzie... i am heady all the way with this danec for all seasons.. a lovely flow that simply mesmerizes even when the dance of farewell stoops and says goodbye... wow!.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 8:35:00 AM

    Lizzy, you have successfully written a spectacular write here! I was moved greatly by the poem! The romance of someone blind but can see via love, that is really great Lizzy!! But it's sad to see them say goodbye, a part of life we must all go through. Just a heartfelt life! Loved your poem!

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 7:16:00 AM

    Every season embraced whether it be with joy or a few tears.. Beautiful gem, Elizabeth :)Wilma

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 6:38:00 AM

    You have a well spring of poetry within that is struggling to escape for all to see. lovely, Elizaqbeth.

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 6:19:00 AM

    * "Good Morning My Dear Sweet Precious, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth * Hope Your Beauty Is Having A Very Wonderful Day * Stay Beautiful * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 5:46:00 AM

    Enjoyed your write today, very beautiful and so depictive of life.

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