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Timeless Currents

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Timeless Currents

"Mirrored Refrain": The poem is formed by three or more quatrains where two lines within the quatrain are the "mirrored refrain" or alternating refrain. The rhyme scheme is as follows-- xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB etc.. x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem. A and B represent the refrain.


Spirits in line with continuity
Shining bright through contrast
Insatiable you, everyday starts anew
A love that is meant to last

Growing together, learning more and more
There is nothing we can't work through
A love that is meant to last
Insatiable you, everyday starts anew

Swimming through the timeless currents of bliss
Our souls unite, no impasse
Insatiable you, everyday starts anew
A love that is meant to last

Time shared for eternity, we are meant to be
Even in anger nothing is ever taboo
A love that is meant to last
Insatiable you, everyday starts anew

Conversations stimulte a mental vacation
A lasting impression sending me into climax
Insatiable you, everyday starts anew
A love that is meant to last 

Thirty years from now old and grey, we remain
and never bid adieu
A love that is meant to last
Insatiable you, everyday starts anew

Jared Pickett
11/30/2011

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  1. Date: 2/13/2014 8:13:00 PM
    I'm pretty new to Poetry Soup, but I've slowly been reading your poems. Timeless Currents spoke to me. It's beautiful, difficult to write, but the imagery is what I've wanted all my life. Who knows what the future will bring, but I loved this. Great job! Maria

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 8:17:00 AM
    just yesterday I was thinking of u Lone Wolf ASavvy 1.. u are so welcomed back luv.. so happy u survived whatever kept u away .. and u were soooo missed.. glad u enjoyed my spider bite .. now if u want to enter u can read the rules and bite another poet to join in the fun.. please update me on the happenings in your life luv..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:30:00 PM
    Interesting poetic form..Seems like it would be hard to write..Thanks for stopping by..Good to hear from you again and read your work again..Thanks for the encouraging comments..I hope that you get to visit the shore soon also..Sara

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your piece this morning :)

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 8:02:00 AM
    So wonderful to read your poetry once again Jared... Charma

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 10:52:00 AM
    Good to see you posting again Jared...This one must be the one you dreamed of and waited for...good luck...enjoyed ...Marty