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Insatiable You

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Insatiable You

my love for you grows 
day by day in every way
we have our highs we have had our lows 
our skies are never grey
you give me love in heavy dose
our love will remain 
always

I have an insatiable appetite for you.

Jared Pickett
11/30/2011

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  1. Date: 2/18/2014 10:45:00 AM

    I know it's not one of your new ones; but I like how direct your feelings are here. There is no misunderstanding them ;)

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 12:48:00 PM

    When you are insatiable for someone~~Means you are healthy my man. ~~Best way to exist! and writing a wonderful poem is also a great way to exist. you're batting a 100.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 7:22:00 PM

    Jared, very tastey... I call this the best diet ever... I love your poem.. brings the goodness in ever relationship... have a good one,,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 11:09:00 AM

    Heya Jared. I barely "met" you before you seemed to sort of leave the soup(I entered one of your Tetractys contests. Never heard of the form before that, and now I really dig the form!). Anyway, nice to see you posting again. From this poem, it seems as if you are in the heat of things. High or low. I chuckled at the comment below, because in Canada we were taught to spell gray with an a, eh. Eh :D

  1. Date: 11/29/2011 10:16:00 PM

    Optimistic! I hope it works out for you, don't get too consumed. Also, Kudos on spelling "grey" correctly.   -KMD