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So Close Yet So Far Away

So close,
Yet so far away,
I miss you every day,
If only there was a way to see,
To speak to you,
If I could,
I would do everything,
Just to hold you,
Look into your eyes,
Make you smile,
Make you feel worthwhile.

But still,
You are so close,
Yet so far away…

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  1. Date: 12/8/2011 3:15:00 PM

    Gosh!(blush) It felt like you wrote that to me. :o) Great job! I love the love you put into your works.

    Mir Avatar Asra Mir Date: 12/8/2011 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awww thank you :) Do keep reading :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2011 3:20:00 PM

    Beautifully expressed..... love the way you have put your feeling into each work.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 1:43:00 AM

    Intense write! Keep it up. Thanks for visiting me, madame. I'll be sure to return in kind.

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 1:37:00 PM

    Nice , feelings

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 9:48:00 AM

    great emotion,,,,the feelings are so real,,,,great write.....