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  1. Date: 4/20/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Wow Chris...I look up to you!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 6:00:00 PM
    well..I guess we get trapped because we too still have flaws? I guess we just best worry over not doing this to others and wow that's a hard enough job aye? Hope all is well with you. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Chris extremely creative! love it! sure don't wanna go there!...and oh...thanks for your comment on my short verse "grapes unpeeling" right back atcha, brother!!! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 8:31:00 AM
    Chris-Can't believe I missed this one-wowza! And you were the ONLY one to get my haiku message-very impressive. I will repost my awards later today-be on the lookout :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 2:54:00 PM
    ahhh well the devil has to have something to do [if I believed in one ;)] BIG HUGS Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 7:13:00 AM
    Trying to ignore them doesn't work at times, they just tend to pop up again and again.. love the format of "slipping" btw, great effect :) love W

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 2:52:00 PM
    It's so true, Chris...all the negative people in this world should be rounded up, sent to a veterinary clinic to have a venom-ectomy, then returned back to the general population. If removing their venom doesn't prove effective, well,....then we should resort to lobotomies. Oh,...and burn down their lairs too. Then there will be no where for them to store the bodies of those they have destroyed with their lies and negativity. .......caffeine kick,...I know.....

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 1:11:00 PM
    Insightful piece, Chris. I think we've all met people like these

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 12:02:00 PM
    Easy to throw negative stuff around, and, I agree, the throwers are trying to drag their victims down to a lower level. Strange, but the ones who might consider life unfair are most often positive in nature. Like your poem mucho. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 7:28:00 AM
    ei btw, let me share with you my sorta freaky/funny moment-- passed by a toll booth today when an ad there caught my eye (I hardly see ads on tollbooths?!) It had my name there (I rarely see my name with the same spelling) + a mobile #, then I saw the Other name above it (there were just 2 names & # listed)-- guess what the other name was?! Haha-- Chris! I had to laugh aloud since at the bottom, I saw it was for some "MATES Hotline" LOLOL hahahaha! Geez, I wish I took a photo of it! o_O

    nawala Avatar wala na nawala
    Date: 12/2/2011 11:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh! Oops~ Didn't mean to spill the beans here, I think Chris is too busy taking in calls, he is So in demand-- heehee kidding-- nah...I can only speak for myself-- now as for Chris, who knows what kind of double life he leads?! lol
    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels
    Date: 12/1/2011 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So the two of you live a double life Missy??? :D
    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 11/30/2011 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    how cool is this? lol. Fun stuff.
  1. Date: 11/30/2011 7:23:00 AM
    Hey, very cool monorhyme here that didn't sound forced, it just flowed smoothly for me, and I liked the effect of slipping here-- not to mention what you say here, a bunch of people sure seem to do that, bringing down people along with them, and yup smoke and mirrors like you say--sorry i seem to be missing out on a bunch of your writes ...

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 3:45:00 PM
    Yes Chris a true worded scribe here its a sad thing though when they prove you right in your prior estimation:)

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 3:30:00 PM
    I can definitely think of a group of people this applies to. I think this is a very melodic and pretty awesome poem. Very nice!

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 6:48:00 PM
    You are right, all that smoke and mirrors is hiding ugly opinions. Enjoyed this one, Chris. :) Catie

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 6:45:00 PM
    From slipping into the poem I knew this was going to be good and boy was I right, lifes full of smoke, mirrors and bullsh1t...the message in this is real and rings true for many..your wording is superb..great piece Chris. xxx