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Our breath

Snap !
Crackle !
Pop !

Like the Fourth of July
in this crisp cold…the
lil’ boy !

Least we forget;
that jump for joy

Our breath
still meets



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  1. Date: 12/1/2011 10:43:00 AM

    Sounds like the two of you are having fun either in the leaves or snow. Nice to share those moments and thanks for sharing with us. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/29/2011 6:43:00 PM

    I wonder if their breaths ended in a kiss. You leave me wondering James, such a nice thing to do! :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 8:08:00 PM

    James... lol... i love all the sparks here... ..Enjoyed;-) thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 2:42:00 PM

    Sounds like a leaf pile to me, eh? Very seasonal, with life forces. Enjoyed especially. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 8:58:00 PM

    Indeed, let's not forget. enjoyed this fun piece alot. Wishing you a great week James ~.~

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 3:59:00 PM

    this is sure a fun read, James. I almost confused you with another james I know today!! Glad to see this recent posting of yours up!

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 7:41:00 AM

    Interesting read...enjoyed .

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 7:07:00 AM

    Very nice image my friend... very nice.. Michael