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Wayward Pilgrim

Thou wayward pilgrim
Oh come rest thy weary soul  
Down by the river Jordan

Thou wayward pilgrim
Unburden thine heavy load
Rest  by the river of life 

Oh wayward pilgrim
lift your dimmed eyes toward home
Oh what happiness awaits!

Oh wayward pilgrim
in yonder distance joy waits
Jerusalem, home sweet home


Rick Parise contest: Anciet Song 

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  1. Date: 4/23/2012 9:35:00 AM

    Yes, Jerusalem ...Great work..Don't know if contest has been judged or not if not good luck....Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for taking the time to review my work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 6:55:00 AM

    Great poem for this contest written almost in psalm verse. Well done, Lori

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 11:52:00 AM

    You remind me of a 5th grade teacher I had in Texas :) Great poem, I love the diction, it brings finesse to the piece... Love, J.

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 6:57:00 AM

    Well written and well said. Loved it!

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 2:16:00 AM

    Winning wishes, Lori,..this one is a nice write, enjoyed it every bit..thnx for your visit

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 9:04:00 PM

    gosh, Lori, I think you did this poetry form great justice. Great theme and writing of the form!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 7:31:00 PM

    You did a good job with this one dear Lori, nice write. Hugs,Vie