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It Seems So Very Sad

When I was younger, 
I used to watch the older 
Couples in awe.
Silence was all that was
spoken between them.
I thought it to be so sad.
My heart went out to them,
because it seemed as though
they had nothing left to say.
And I used to wonder why;
Even after so many years,
How could there ever be
nothing that you could possibly 
speak to one another.
Perhaps words of love,
Which are often not spoken enough.
Now I look at us,
It seems so very sad.
Silence is all that is
spoken between us;
Words of love is something...
We seldom have.

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  1. Date: 11/26/2011 10:07:00 AM

    Hello Kelli, This is written so lovely, Your words are so full of passion and love. We can all relate to what you have penned here. As Always, Shar Wonderful!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 7:32:00 PM

    Kelli, hello! This will be my first comment since.. my thanksgiving day.. wow! What a blast it ended being... About your poem: its a sad thought to think and wonder love is as wasted as yesterdays words... one day we have much to say.. the next just slips away with so much silence.. but, you know what... looks should say it all.. SO lets make the best out of everything ,, and communicate better... enjoyed this poem... p.d.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 6:08:00 PM

    A beautiful piece that describes the fading of love. Thanks for sharing. *Denise*

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 6:01:00 PM

    * "I Believe That Recognition Is The Beginning of Finding Oneself Back Upon The Blessed Paths of Loves Sacred Path * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Kelli * Always Nurturing As Denying Oneself Whileas Living For The Other * Telling Them How Much You Love Them & How Very Beautiful They Forever Are * A Thousand Truths More * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *