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WINTER SCENERY

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WINTER SCENERY

Beautiful celestial crystals grip the earth by the neck 
And all servants of shiver on the skin pore deck.
A Tit in elegance flaps her leathery wings
And sings all blessings that winter brings.
Nude trees coated by soft pile of snow
Stand in awe and worship the silvery glow.
The Robins can never be left out,
The sweethearts of the very cold sprout
Dressed in orange-red and glittering brown feathers
And offer adoration to the cold weather.
No charmer like the winter's silvery gown
That carpets the dull face of every town.


THEME: WINTER SCENERY.
For Francine Roberts' contest: A winter couplet

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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 8:23:00 PM
    a wonderful poem... don't know if this contest is over... have a great one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:03:00 AM
    This is beautiful Joseph. I love robins also. I have added you as a fav poet. I hope that is okay with you?

  1. Date: 11/22/2011 12:10:00 AM
    Joseph, this is delightful. I especially loved that final couplet, the silver gown that carpets the dull face of every town! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 6:30:00 PM
    Nice personification and wish you good luck in the contest, Joseph

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 6:29:00 PM
    Very nice couplet Joseph. I like how you personify nature and use vibrant words to create a beautiful portrait of winter.

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 4:46:00 PM
    such amazing beauty and elegance in these lines Joseph..good luck in the contest.. surely a top winner my friend.. luv the robins in this ... a fav of mine luv..

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 12:25:00 PM
    Outstanding imagery, Joey! I love the thought of the robins "offering adoration" to winter and the last two lines are very, very creative! Francine will love your entry too. Best wishes in her contest and I hope you enjoy a happy Thanksgiving! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 11:39:00 AM
    Elegant write-up Osita. Sure we are approaching winter now in Nigeria. Great work. Mathy