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Lost in a dream

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Lost in a dream

She's lost in a naked dream
Barring all to see
With each key stroke
Undressing all of me

Barring all to see
Reveling vulnerability 
Undressing all of me
Stings so painstakingly

Revealing vulnerability
With each key stroke
Stings so painstakingly 
She's lost in a naked dream

Lay

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  1. Date: 12/2/2011 9:31:00 PM
    * "AGAIN I FIND MYSELF YOUR BEAUTIES PENETRATING VERSE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL WALAYEE * I LOVE YOUR DEPTHFUL PASSION * TIS THE GOLD AMID THE VEINS OF POETIC SPLENDOURS * SHE LOOKS & SEEMS SOOO BEAUTIFUL * SOMETHING VERY LOVELY ABOUT HER * I AM GOING TO FAVE YOUR BEAUTY AS A * WELL, LET'S JUST SAY I FIND YOUR GIFT VERY BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 2:51:00 PM
    go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 10:33:00 AM
    Smile, oh but my and many loving eyes behold the true Beauty inside and again, so very lovely she is amid this truthful light * So, never forget this and Yesss, absolutely wonderful verse * Painting yourself amid such beautiful colours, my dear beautiful Lay * My love always, John! *