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Colorless

                                                             I
                                                       slid down
                                                      a rainbow
                                                   that's colorless
                           screaming fables till the fountain poured bright..

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:31:00 AM
    so true Michael....feelings and emotions so jumbled up here....u did that in just few wrds...ur emotions streaming out like furious flood, wild but silent, serene , not violent, aaah wonderful !....if ur a fly then u sing with poetic tune...like a dazzling moon..!

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 4:33:00 PM
    so imaginative and ultra creative Michael luv.. took this ride with u all the way .. amazing visuals..xoxo.. J.G. needed this ride luv..

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 11:22:00 AM
    what wonderful imagery in this one, Michael. I can just see it, and of course, those wonderful fables enticing the rainbow. :) Catie

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 9:39:00 AM
    I love the two last lines... Awesome, Michael :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 9:00:00 AM
    i like it, you captured the fun side of a rainbow and the colors it brings, cory

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 8:47:00 PM
    Very interesting one, Michael!! Me likes!

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 1:00:00 PM
    I love the imagery and the message is so uplifting, Michael. A delight to read! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 11:59:00 AM
    I love this!!!!!!Excellent my friend!!!

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 11:36:00 AM
    wonderful Tetractys Michael.Enjoyed.