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A day's solitude

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A day's solitude

Washed a load of clothes
And hung them out to be dried
And busied myself all day….
As I entered in
The sleeve of the shirt…
Rose in observance.

In a gust of wind
Night clothes twined and intertwined
The harvest moon being full…..
Sparse clouds made its light
The bed side flat as desert….
The pillow plump, cool fable.

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August 18, 2014 (A Repost but never entered into any contest)
Form: Sedoka



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  1. Date: 9/8/2014 2:25:00 PM
    Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/6/2014 12:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Dr. Mehta. I can see the clothes blowing in the wind.

  1. Date: 9/6/2014 8:26:00 AM
    Congratulations, Dr. Ram on your fine win! Great imagery. Kika

  1. Date: 9/5/2014 10:02:00 PM
    Interesting, I love the way clothes dance on a line in the wind. I don't know this form, but your descriptions were great. Grats on your contest placing :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2014 5:35:00 PM
    Congratulations, DR RAM, 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 10:41:00 AM
    I can just see the night clothes twisting in the wind, missing their place on a soft bed, Dr. Ram. Another great sedoka! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 12:21:00 AM
    Good Sedoka doc. have a blissful day,much love~O.O.