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A song of songs

on the verge of love,
mutual discovery unveiled
in their secret world;
lips to lips ,sealed,
hearts in passion pound
ardour's whispers sound;
need unchains desire,
pleasure's fever fans a fire,
each flame thrusting higher;
in duet's crescendo choir
realisation exceeds hope,
promise, with trust elope;

enchantment metamorphose

as love,sublime,grows 

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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 6:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "MIX" contest Brian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 2:45:00 PM

    This is one of the most romantic ones I have seen you do. I quite like it!

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 2:45:00 PM

    oh, and I see it got a win with PD. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 8:47:00 AM

    Very nice Brian. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 1:55:00 AM

    BRIAN, Congratulations on your wonderful win . I would also like to thank you for the support in my contest. I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving. Take care, and have yourself a great night,..xoxox~p.d.

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 6:08:00 PM

    Captivating and a warm heartfelt read. You are very talented and it is with great pleasure to read you. Thank you for sharing And May God Bless!

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 5:12:00 PM

    Beautiful Brian xx

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 4:19:00 PM

    This pulsates with such beauty, Brian...one can almost sense the love build. So nice to read. :)