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67 Suicides

My eyes are open yet I see nothing
because there is nothing to see,

I go to my job and stare at the clock
there's nothing that I want to be,

I long to be conscious when I am
asleep
perhaps in my dreams I am free,

I seem alive but I'm really half-dead
and my path is strewn with debris.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Interesting work that you have penned...Sara

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 1:05:00 PM

    Beautiful poem, Danielle :) I love the rhythm and such deep meaning behind it al :) MY kind of poetry! Thanks for sharing, Love, J.

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 8:45:00 PM

    Danielle, wow...i love the depth where this came from... especailly the part where you say...there is nothing to see... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 5:36:00 AM

    * "I Love Your Beautiful Name My Dear, Sweet Danielle * The Flavour of This Soulit Poem * Bringing Something Clinging Amid The Darker Shades Perhaps * Smiling Into Yohr Beautiful Eyes * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *