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gold digger

killing for love? we should out grow it 
unless it's for deceivers and you know it
those less fortunate charity recievers
those pretty eye's and nails
masscara  that never fails
those that are witty for a reason
allways dressed up for the season
when you speak their eye's are wide open
tabulating the latest slogan 
until something better comes along
then swoops the shadow of lonliness
what happened to that pressence
what happened to that smile
why so suddenly anothers child
a shared togetherness for a short while
feeling so used like a rung on a ladder
the dirt from your shoes on my face
my pursuit of you a public disgrace
and when i finally see, like the prodicals son
my first thought about a gun
who? what for the reader may ask
the world cannot keep the both of us

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  1. Date: 4/9/2012 12:40:00 PM

    So strong poem and very true,unfortunately,I love it,thank you dear John,Ivy

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:06:00 PM

    I am afraid I don't like anything with the word gun in it. Yes, we have gold diggers in this world and we have users in this world but in the end God does judge. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 2:58:00 PM

    you thought about a gun? the word 'gun' is synonymous with violence in my mind and I'm afraid the word police cannot condone it under any circumstances...

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III Date: 12/3/2011 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    violence is loves answer to jealosy and deceit. it's a principal.
  1. Date: 12/2/2011 7:17:00 AM

    Amazing John, such deep content and great rhyme. You sure got a special poem going here and I need to have it as a fav. P S I see you were around last night looking at some of my older ones - thanks for the visit and sweet comments.

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 7:28:00 PM

    hmmm... I can't wait to see the rest of this one. Thank you, John, for the Beautiful Christmas card you sent, it's lovely. I'm sending mine out during the first week of December, look for your then. Hugs, catie :)