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rose blooms

rose blooms--
buzzing bee hovers
for sweet sip



sown seeds
nestle in fertile soil-- 
a full moon



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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 3:27:00 PM

    oh most precisely lovely haiku! congrad's oh fast learning and cutest one! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 10:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 3:37:00 PM

    Many congrats on your big place win in the contest. Have a nice day

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 12:03:00 PM

    Nikko congrats on your win, excellent..David

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 8:06:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery here Nikko!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 1:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your success with these delightful haiku... well done Nikko...Margaret

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:41:00 PM

    Nikko, these were so pretty. and unbelievably I had not even seen them yet. A big congratulations to you. Well deserved win!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:16:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Nikko. Nicely written haiku. Kim

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 5:03:00 PM

    You are nailing the haiku in the strict form ....hooray for you, Nikko, these are wonderful! Congratulations !!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 4:39:00 PM

    Wonderful imagery in both of these winning poems Nikko. Congratulations. I can't be on the computer much these days because of eyestrain. Will read what I can. Blessings

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 2:03:00 PM

    Heya nikko. A big congrats on your placement in Charles' contest! I enjoyed reading both haiku - the 2nd one is my favourite of the two. Great job.

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 4:20:00 AM

    NikkoI like how we can say so much in so few words with Haiku poetry . The first is my favourite. Anne.

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 9:24:00 AM

    Nice short poems. The second one is beautiful - worthy of Basho! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 8:23:00 AM

    Nice Haiku's Nikko makes me think of summer rather than the snow we have on the ground. Supposed to have more snow today with lots of wind. Hate winter season-so rose blooms take me to a nice place. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 8:16:00 PM

    Anything that ends by the moon is very good, so is your poem Nikko. Nicely done. Hugs, Vie

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 7:24:00 PM

    Hi Nikko, very lovely haiku you have penned. Enjoyed. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 7:24:00 PM

    sweet!

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 7:18:00 PM

    Dear Nikko~I know this is for skitty skats contest...lol... I'm sending you an invitation to the POETRY CHAT ROOM...lol... not that you don't know how to use YAHOO messenger... Is this a shorter form of haiku... wondering... and your haiku's are very prettyyyy..lucky bee... sippping off my rose bushes.... enjoyed,..p.d.