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Falling into a death trap

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Falling into a death trap

Im falling, im falling into a death trap, my blood covers the dance floor, i cant take much more, im falling, im falling into a death trap, my blood covers the dance floor, i cant take much more... because i cant be who you expect me to be, because i fail still to be what I want to be... im falling, im falling into a death trap, my blood covers the dance floor, my feelings are off to shore, and they wont come back no more.

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 7:52:00 PM
    Excellent write, hard to live up to others expectations when we have trouble living up to our own