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Aftermath

The first touch of night
Marks the eastern horizon
I've spent the whole day
Trying not to remember
The skill of your deception

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  1. Date: 11/24/2011 11:20:00 AM

    wow, this is really Cool, JIM!!!

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 7:48:00 PM

    Oh ouch! Well done! Nicely written, making the right effect of emotion with a few words in this well written Tanka. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.