Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

Haiku Sunrise



from my boat I saw... golden rays of early light striate the heavens

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 11/18/2011 3:51:00 PM

    Congrats Margaret on a wonderful win for this Haiku of creative perfection luv..

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 11:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 8:32:00 AM

    Nicely said Margaret. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 3:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, margaret

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 2:29:00 AM

    MARGARET, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 9:00:00 PM

    Striate! Fabulous word choice. Like this one very much, and I'm certain PD will, too!

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 6:58:00 PM

    oooh, I love that line "striate the heavens" Luscious, Marg!

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 6:31:00 PM

    Hi Margaret. I don't know how to comment on Haiku so I wanted to say that I was here and enjoyed your poem. Tony