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You Can't Break Me: I'm Already Broken

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Below is the poem entitled You Can't Break Me: I'm Already Broken which was written by poet Hannah Croy. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You Can't Break Me: I'm Already Broken

He burned my life right to the core,
 But its not like i had much left to live for.
Your the only one who can choose this path you've chosen,
 And you can't take back the words that you've already
spoken,
                  You can't break me...
         I'm already broken.
He stuck his knife in my heart,
 So deep,
But it's not like i don't know what it's like to bleed.
 There's nothing to say, 
This is the path I've chosen,
 It's best I don't think,
About what you've already spoken
    
                     You can't break me...
        I'm Already Broken

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  1. Date: 11/15/2011 9:00:00 AM
    Hanna, this is awesome! I think you really should consider making it a longer poem. It's wonderful. Hugs, catie :)

    Croy Avatar Hannah Croy
    Date: 11/15/2011 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much :) It really means alot, and i will work on it :)