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To My Ocean

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To My Ocean

On Her shore I stand At a meeting of sea and land. The waves roll in at a steady pace. In the distance I spy Her face. Her smile so white, It's the foam in the light. Her blue eyes beguile I feel Her love go on for miles. I take steps closer to my Ocean. Thoughts of joy are set in motion. Slow and idly, I savor my swim. When, suddenly, all grows dim. The waves grow larger in the storm. Furious gyres have taken form. As I struggle to get to air, Panic consumes, as does despair. In the din I'm going under. All my hope is torn asunder. I concede defeat whilst sinking down, For my love caused us both to drown.

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 9:00:00 AM
    Absolutely incredible! Totally unexpected turn of events, very original! Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 1:01:00 AM
    from loving expectance to lurking doom... nice one dear.

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 8:38:00 PM
    this poem is really amazing i really like it its well written good job