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Sunrise

Natures own delight.
A beautiful end to night.
Simply breath taking.

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  1. Date: 11/18/2011 9:28:00 PM

    Congrats Erica on a wonderful win for this creative Haiku luv..

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 11:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Erica. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 9:11:00 AM

    Erica congrats on your great win..David

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 8:18:00 AM

    Well written Erica. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 3:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Erica

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 2:34:00 AM

    ERICA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 2:36:00 PM

    I like the simplicit of this haiku. The use of rhyme is engaging. I wonder, though, if the commas help? Particulalry L2 feels to me like it doesn't really need one. It's a small point and I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes, Jim