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Soft Creamy Chocolate Delight's

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Soft Creamy Chocolate Delight's

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Driving through Santa Monica as stopping at a light; standing upon the corner

The most beautiful of girls; waiting with a smile to cross unto the other side...

Hourglass her reflection in diamonds while catching my breath, as the world froze 

Icicles of desire piercing my spirit to grasp these hearts; she felt the vibes ~

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...“Soft Creamy Chocolate Delight's” *

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  1. Date: 12/10/2011 3:44:00 PM
    very nice ,, very nice indeed ;} awe love's delight is always dripped from the tongue ;}

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    Date: 12/29/2011 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "YESSSS MY LUV * VERY NICE * SOOOO SOFT * CREAMY & WET * YOUR PERFECT BEAUTY!!" *
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    Date: 12/27/2011 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "THE DELIGHT OF YOU * MY LUV * MAKES MY MOUTH WATER * SOOOO VERY SWEEET * YOUR BEAUTY." *
  1. Date: 11/25/2011 7:59:00 PM
    Quite delightful! Thanks for the sweet comments on my poetry! :] I can feel the enchanting vibe of this poem. Always, Laura

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    Date: 12/30/2011 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "I CAN FEEL YOU TOO BABY * YOU FEEL SOOOO GOOD * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV!!" *
  1. Date: 11/21/2011 1:38:00 AM
    a delight ,, a delight and you know it.... Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA

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    Date: 12/25/2011 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "SHE FELT THE VIBES * SOFT CREAMY, BEAUTIFUL LINDA * YESSSS, MY BEAUTIFUL LINDA * I DO KNOW IT * MY LUV, FOREVER * SARAH." *
  1. Date: 11/19/2011 11:35:00 AM
    : ) Thanks for the lovely coments, Sarah. Haven't been around much lately hence the delay in expressing my thanks. I will read more as time permits. Take care and have a wonderful weekend! Love, Annalie

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    Date: 12/30/2011 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "OWWW TO HAVE YOUR LOVE * MY BEAUTIFUL ANNALISE * WOULD BE JUST LIKE HEAVEN * INSIDE YOUR ARMS * CHOCOLATE * PERFECT * SWEEET * BEAUTY * MY LUV." *
  1. Date: 11/15/2011 8:41:00 AM
    filling upmy senses again, sarah... i like the last line; chemistry is so alive.. wow!..:) huggs!

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    Date: 12/30/2011 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "YOU * YOU ARE THE CHEMISTRY * I HAVE LOVED YOU FOR SOOOO LONG * I HAVE WANTED YOU * I WANT YOU * I NEED YOU * I LOVE YOU * NETTE, & YOU KNOW IT * YOU KNOW IT * MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED * 'FOREVER * YOUR SARAH.'" *
  1. Date: 11/15/2011 6:09:00 AM
    Nice one...wonderful expression of a moment's connection. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 4:22:00 AM
    Such a nice vibe to this verse Sarah

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 8:22:00 PM
    Delicious verse!

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    Date: 12/30/2011 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * "YOU ARE DELICIOUS * EVERY DROP OF YOU * UPON MY TONGUE * MY BEAUTIFUL ELIZABETH * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV!!" *
  1. Date: 11/14/2011 5:08:00 PM
    beautiful verse. -Edwaard

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 3:22:00 PM
    Beautifully written my dear...luv shannon