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sad

i
always
know you’re sad
when you answer
me in a nearly inaudible drone
the eardrum of my heart nearly bursting
from the thunder
clap of tears
falling
down

by James Rasmusson for double tetractys contest

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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 10:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Double Tetracty's" contest James. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:57:00 PM

    Congrats James on top ten win for this marvelous entry luv...

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:08:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, James. Great imagery. Kim

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 2:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on this wonderful entry being in the winner's circle James.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 12:30:00 PM

    very very nice and intense imagery....well done

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:34:00 AM

    Wow, you say so much James, congratulations on your win :) Wilma

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:51:00 AM

    Hey, long time no see. WAy to go with this sad poem, James. Congrats on the winners list!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 7:19:00 AM

    great poem James. This poem thunders out the silence in the depth of the unity of souls in the bond of love. Excellent. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 6:32:00 AM

    James congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 5:43:00 AM

    Great write James!! Im glad you re entered it and I didn't miss this gem... Congrats my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 8:27:00 AM

    I read this one yesterday, James, and the sound of that silence almost bursts my eardrums. hugs, Catie :)