Juicy Kaboosey by JSLambert Chinaski domo-MR.ROBOTO


john aaron green Date: 11/29/2011 10:41:00 PM this is so kool,,,wonderful creation.....
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/28/2011 8:14:00 PM J.S.LAMBERT,, STOPPING BY TO SAY HI! still a nice smile your poems bring to mind..Enjoyed;-) Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.
ChiquitaChiamaka Baity Date: 11/25/2011 3:15:00 PM lol.. nice one ....smiles... Chiquita
yasmin khan Date: 11/19/2011 8:51:00 AM are you royalty or something,your name reads like a title...what is this kaboosey,sounds like kapsa,anyways,i hope you can read this after all that eye work...
Doris Culverhouse Date: 11/18/2011 8:54:00 PM guys and gals.....cracked pots the lot
Russell Sivey Date: 11/18/2011 8:37:00 AM Sorry JS, I'm not used to commenting on your poetry. I know that is not a valid excuse, but I'll try to comment on all the new poems. I'll try and find them and from now on I'll be able to comment on them as it is in my brain to do so. Hey, congrats on your victory in this contest, Awesome. Wonderful write JS, I see why this was picked as one of the placements...Great work!!
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/18/2011 6:14:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest JS. Love, Carol
iolanda Scripca Date: 11/17/2011 5:52:00 PM Late congrats on your well deserved win, ~JSLambert Domo arigato MR.ROBOTOthkUvm. You made me smile today!
Joe Maverick Date: 11/17/2011 12:15:00 PM Congratulations on the win you have achieved...J S L.
Carrie Richards Date: 11/17/2011 8:50:00 AM How can one not love this and smile!! :)
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/17/2011 2:12:00 AM Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, JS
Joyce Johnson Date: 11/16/2011 7:07:00 PM Great work. Congratulations. Joyce
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/16/2011 2:12:00 PM Gosh, for me, YOURS was like THE one to beat!! One of the very best, my friend. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
Gwendolen R. Date: 11/16/2011 1:32:00 PM Congrats on this winning write. Gwendolen
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/16/2011 1:30:00 PM I knew Rick would enjoy your poem, Joey. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
E. N. Igma Date: 11/15/2011 5:08:00 PM butt struttin boogie - AMEN!
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 11/15/2011 6:14:00 AM LOL I can see it...in a French Impressionist's painting...ladies in the park just like this! LOl (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/14/2011 4:01:00 PM Oh, this is awesome, Joey! Gave me quite a giggle. Wishing you success in Rick's contest. Also, I've been having phone/internet problems so I just read and responded to your Soup mails. Love, Carolyn
Tara Beach Date: 11/13/2011 4:51:00 PM lol. ur silly :P .. and yes i will comment and let u know when i have written something new... i usually wait for something to hit me, i don't force my poetry.
binibining P.iNk Date: 11/13/2011 10:58:00 AM haha! funky title, juicy indeed! What a very entertaining than-bauk this, is JS :) and hmmm that must be some butt, to wear the eyes out like that O_o... and oh shucks, I read kash's comment below, I'm afraid he's right-- for the 3rd line, the rhyme should be in the 2nd syllable... how about something like "eyes wearing out" -- btw I am loving your new name :D
kash poet Date: 11/13/2011 7:07:00 AM Very nice.But I have doubt over the rhyming syllable of 3rd line:wea/RING--ring is supposed to rhyme withere* andair.Thanks for your kind comment at my page.*
Chris D. Aechtner Date: 11/12/2011 10:50:00 PM Deliciously crafted :D~ And I mean this most sincerely. I really dig the words you used to actually create the rhyming pattern. Very well done.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/12/2011 9:08:00 PM oooh lalalala. this is GOOD Than-Buuk!!!
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/12/2011 9:00:00 PM J.S.l.,, good luck in the contest.. Now tell me,, how can one outwear their eyes..kidding... we are women... enjoyed,..p.d.

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