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Juicy Kaboosey

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Juicy Kaboosey


her derriere in the air high eyes wearing out
Than-Bauk written for Rick Parise's contest

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  1. Date: 11/29/2011 10:41:00 PM

    this is so kool,,,wonderful creation.....

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 8:14:00 PM

    J.S.LAMBERT,, STOPPING BY TO SAY HI! still a nice smile your poems bring to mind..Enjoyed;-) Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 3:15:00 PM

    lol.. nice one ....smiles... Chiquita

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 8:54:00 PM

    guys and gals.....cracked pots the lot

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 8:37:00 AM

    Sorry JS, I'm not used to commenting on your poetry. I know that is not a valid excuse, but I'll try to comment on all the new poems. I'll try and find them and from now on I'll be able to comment on them as it is in my brain to do so. Hey, congrats on your victory in this contest, Awesome. Wonderful write JS, I see why this was picked as one of the placements...Great work!!

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 6:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest JS. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 5:52:00 PM

    Late congrats on your well deserved win, ~JSLambert Domo arigato MR.ROBOTOthkUvm. You made me smile today!

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 12:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win you have achieved...J S L.

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 8:50:00 AM

    How can one not love this and smile!! :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 2:12:00 AM

    Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, JS

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 7:07:00 PM

    Great work. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:12:00 PM

    Gosh, for me, YOURS was like THE one to beat!! One of the very best, my friend. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:32:00 PM

    Congrats on this winning write. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:30:00 PM

    I knew Rick would enjoy your poem, Joey. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 5:08:00 PM

    butt struttin boogie - AMEN!

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 6:14:00 AM

    LOL I can see it...in a French Impressionist's painting...ladies in the park just like this! LOl (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 4:01:00 PM

    Oh, this is awesome, Joey! Gave me quite a giggle. Wishing you success in Rick's contest. Also, I've been having phone/internet problems so I just read and responded to your Soup mails. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 4:51:00 PM

    lol. ur silly :P .. and yes i will comment and let u know when i have written something new... i usually wait for something to hit me, i don't force my poetry.

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 10:58:00 AM

    haha! funky title, juicy indeed! What a very entertaining than-bauk this, is JS :) and hmmm that must be some butt, to wear the eyes out like that O_o... and oh shucks, I read kash's comment below, I'm afraid he's right-- for the 3rd line, the rhyme should be in the 2nd syllable... how about something like "eyes wearing out" -- btw I am loving your new name :D

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 7:07:00 AM

    Very nice.But I have doubt over the rhyming syllable of 3rd line:wea/RING--ring is supposed to rhyme with*ere* and*air*.Thanks for your kind comment at my page.

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 10:50:00 PM

    Deliciously crafted :D~ And I mean this most sincerely. I really dig the words you used to actually create the rhyming pattern. Very well done.

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 9:08:00 PM

    oooh lalalala. this is GOOD Than-Buuk!!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 9:00:00 PM

    J.S.l.,, good luck in the contest.. Now tell me,, how can one outwear their eyes..kidding... we are women... enjoyed,..p.d.