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Haiku Snow

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crisp snow slides from roof crashing down in jagged piles... slippery pathway

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  1. Date: 3/3/2012 11:25:00 PM
    came back to an oldie. i'd seen it before but it's still as lovely as ever.

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 5:35:00 PM
    congrats on your success in the contest..I enjoyed. BG

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 3:16:00 PM
    HI, there, Marg. How is it down under today? Congrats on your win here. Can't wait to see your animal haiku. I think I will look right now and see if you posted one.

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 11:20:00 AM
    Congratulations Margaret on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 3:02:00 PM
    Lovely haiku, Margaret. Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest. :) Catie

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 9:47:00 AM
    and boy do I fall on those slippery patches every year! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 1:59:00 PM
    a metaphor is implied in line 3 the fallen snow appears as if it were miniture mountains..you need a new line three, almost no poetic vehicles are used in haiku except occasional alliteration..in this snap shot you have a perfect intro to a SOUND for line three...go for it! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 9:03:00 PM
    This is SO adorable, those miniature mountains. what a sweet sight!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 7:22:00 PM
    A top charter here Marg!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 7:19:00 PM
    a lovely haiku... thank you for sharing,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 6:59:00 PM
    Let's build a snow man Margaret, lovely write Dear Writer, hugs, vie