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The Right Move

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The Right Move


I
am just
passing through
what about you
are you waiting for something more special

I suggest you not wait too much longer
don't wait too late
pass through the
pearly
gate


Curtis Moorman
12 November 2011

For the contest - Double Tetractys

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  1. Date: 11/20/2011 4:36:00 PM
    There were sooo many different angles with this topic, Curtis..The question u pose in the first tetra is so TRUE. The world is waiting for something more special and the Lord is right there and willing to meet them and shower them with gifts galore. In the 2nd tetra you are trying to keep em on the straight and narrow..your efforts thru poetry are noteworthy! Great idea here! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 8:41:00 PM
    enjoyed reading your talented tetractys

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 10:19:00 PM
    C.M., good luck in the contest,.... Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 12:30:00 PM
    May we all pass thru that pearly gate, Curtis (but not too soon, I hope!!!) Good idea for your tetractys!