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  1. Date: 7/4/2012 1:14:00 PM
    very romantic, do you have one?...I like this...

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 6:45:00 PM
    Does he carry you off into the sunset? How romantic; I can't write these short meaningful rhymes, I need too many words I guess but you did a spectacular write with this!

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 8:27:00 PM
    It was supposed to be chocolate and coffee! Now you have made a deadly will cost us another thousand calories to bring Cinnis into our discussion. How evil...ha ha. I shall go on a hunger strike until u post again. I dont want to be your mother bc I will have to spank u. I dont want to be your daughter bc u will definately have to spank me. Let's just settle for'll love my other sister Mel. She will make u laff so hard you'll pee your pants. We roll on the floor laffing.

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 6:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 3:44:00 PM
    Congrats, dear Yasmin, for your Shinning Knight! Way to go! Love, iolanda

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 12:59:00 PM
    Congratulations Yasmin on the ( H M ) , i see the style was right you put in a lot here..!

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 2:17:00 AM
    Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Yasmin

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 7:22:00 PM
    Very nice. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:22:00 PM
    For me, this should be just reversed and put somewhere on the top!! Outstanding as I said earlier when I first saw it. congrats(hmmm) LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:56:00 PM
    So he wears a white nightie? ha ha.( I am totally loaded on caffeine..).This is a romantic and fairytale like...hope he enjoyed this too....High five! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:42:00 PM
    I love the image you created in your than-bauk, Yasmin. I'm still waiting for my white knight. Does yours have a brother? LOL Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 11:26:00 AM
    Your Shining knight is sure a winner, Yasmin. I am glad it is not the black knight. Most enchanting Haiku.Thanks for your admiration of my poem The Autumn. You have boosted my morals. I am grateful. As for the sadness I remember the saying of Socrates. According to him happiness and sorrows are links of a chain when one comes the other is bound to follow. Philosophy aside, in practical life it so happens that when sorrows come they refuse to depart. I wish Socrates was right. Regards. -Yamin

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 7:08:00 AM
    Confused Yas, is this lovely bit of romance for Rick's contest or for him? Something going on we don't know about? C'mon, fess up!

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 7:03:00 AM
    A wonderful way to describe someone you care about

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 4:48:00 AM
    Sound romantic... Keep it up

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 10:03:00 PM
    no no.,,,,, lol... Good poem,,, you don't want to know what color my night is wearing... .. Enjoyed your THAN-BAUK~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 12:53:00 PM
    wowie, I have found my favorite in the contest!! and no, I have not heard much from our mutual friend lately.

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 10:50:00 AM
    I love yours Yas, wishing you the best for Ric's contest ;) love Wilma