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Glittery Story

Tell me this tale of the sun flash
Across your face, too hot, harsh,
Your candid stories like fairy tales;
To ears harrass our illumined faces,
Indeed. I learn laughter's lofty gales.

I will stare at your straight visage-
Water and steel of similar, sly page,
Smooth, flawless in its frank portrayal
Of myself. I should know how rumpled
Water grow into ripples of a storied age.

Yet you Mirror, is yet so smooth;
A worthy canvas, a brushes' tooth,
Fluffy. You narrate my falls and glory
In solemn reflective manner, yours only.
I'm humbled by your simlple, arcane story.

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  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:35:00 PM

    a great piece to start reading your soul here in the soup. love the last stanza, well-penned indeed

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in the "Glow Of Glitter" contest Onyebuchi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 10:42:00 PM

    Nice write,Buchi or Ozone.Congratulations on your win....Happy New Year ,Brother....

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 12:47:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this piece Onybuchi, and all good wishes on the spot achived..!

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 2:47:00 PM

    Onyebuchi, Beauty visage of poetry.Happy New year to you and congratulations on a worthy poem's place victory. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 11:10:00 AM

    Such description you use. Very unique, Onyebuchi. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 10:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 8:41:00 PM

    O.O.,,.. Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 7:49:00 AM

    I only hope to be criticized, I only dream to be corrected.........