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  1. Date: 11/10/2011 12:51:00 PM

    wow, i really like this poem. its very powerful! However, im confused about the part where your words delude those who seem truly pursued? would love to hear your feedback if you dont mind sharing.

    Lee Avatar Simmy Lee Date: 11/16/2011 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi there, thanks so much for the comment! That particular line was meant to suggest that one can seem genuinely interested in some one, even though their actual interest lies not in the person but in the attention that they provide. So in this case, men are 'deluded' into thinking that they are wanted, when it's merely their attention that is desired. I hope this explanation makes sense for you? Thanks again reading!
  1. Date: 11/10/2011 6:27:00 AM

    funny. :) Catie

    Lee Avatar Simmy Lee Date: 11/16/2011 2:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Catie :)