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Can I Can I take your hands and pull you close to me? Can I kiss your lips so I can taste ecstasy? Can I hold you tight like, if you was my girl? Can I look into your eyes and explore a whole new world? Can I pick you up later like around 10? Can I open up the door for you like the gentleman I am? Can I take you to a theatre near you… Can I forget about what’s playing, because I can‘t keep my eyes off you? Can I put my hands on your shoulders and help you relax? Can I proceed giving you what I think you need at the nape, then down to the small of your back? Can I… now call you Baby, because by now I got you going crazy? I got you thinking like “Dam I ‘want to’ have his baby’! Can I? Hold up. Slow up. Pause. Now rewind. Can I? Or rather, would you mind if I rather take my time? Can I…. For the present time leave these thoughts in the back of my mind? Can I… Or rather, Would you mind if I press rewind? Can I take your hands and pull you close to me? Can I kiss your lips so I can taste ecstasy? Can I be your man? Can I use my hands? Can I now call you Baby, because now I got you going crazy? Can I? Hold up. Slow up. Pause. Now rewind...

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