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In Search of a poem

A 
Poem 
Sleeps in me
With high traffic
And I search for nouns, verbs and images.

Breathe in her mouth, speak in ears, touch lips
To mould her shape,
Feel and hear
In my
Heart.

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Dr. Ram Mehta

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  1. Date: 11/10/2011 9:13:00 PM

    wow! the part 'breath in her mouth' is... profound!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 7:40:00 PM

    Really interested in the way you interact with the poetry in this piece Dr Ram, & love the way it is presented:)

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 7:16:00 AM

    Great write Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read!---Lori

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 1:19:00 AM

    Stellar Dr! Immensely Supah Poet Tree Soupin' GOOD!

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:44:00 PM

    Very nice, Dr. Ram. Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:20:00 PM

    Neatly done... stirring awake the treasure within...good job Dr ram...Margaret

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 10:00:00 PM

    This is very nicely done, Dr. Ram! And thanks for my placement in your contest.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 9:12:00 PM

    This is another new form for me, Doc. I believe poems make your mind come alive....and....since u have been writing for sooooo many years, u must have a very busy mind! This poem that sleeps in u also sleeps within me. Thanks for the placement in your quinzaine contest...fun stuff those quinzaines are! They actually sound like a fancy French pastry! mmm. Take care. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:59:00 PM

    dig the gentleness, nice one Dr Ram Mehta~N

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 6:49:00 PM

    I love this Dr. Ram...EXCELLENT!!