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In Search of a poem-Win

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In Search of a poem-Win

Sleeps in me
With high traffic
And I search for nouns, verbs and images.

Breathe in her mouth, speak in ears, touch lips
To mould her shape,
Feel and hear
In my

4th place win
Contest: Under 10 by Skat-Love
Dr. Ram Mehta

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:44:00 PM
    congratulations Dr Ram.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Congratulation..very nice poem

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:30:00 PM
    A stunning poem. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Your few verses are impressing. You deserve a better place than mine

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:30:00 AM
    congratulations on your win friend Ram ;) cheers!!

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:50:00 PM
    sensual imagery Dr., CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 9:13:00 PM
    wow! the part 'breath in her mouth' is... profound!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 7:40:00 PM
    Really interested in the way you interact with the poetry in this piece Dr Ram, & love the way it is presented:)

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 7:16:00 AM
    Great write Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read!---Lori

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 1:19:00 AM
    Stellar Dr! Immensely Supah Poet Tree Soupin' GOOD!

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:44:00 PM
    Very nice, Dr. Ram. Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:20:00 PM
    Neatly done... stirring awake the treasure within...good job Dr ram...Margaret

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 10:00:00 PM
    This is very nicely done, Dr. Ram! And thanks for my placement in your contest.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 9:12:00 PM
    This is another new form for me, Doc. I believe poems make your mind come alive....and....since u have been writing for sooooo many years, u must have a very busy mind! This poem that sleeps in u also sleeps within me. Thanks for the placement in your quinzaine stuff those quinzaines are! They actually sound like a fancy French pastry! mmm. Take care. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:59:00 PM
    dig the gentleness, nice one Dr Ram Mehta~N

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 6:49:00 PM
    I love this Dr. Ram...EXCELLENT!!