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 ice coated fence posts

      punctuate the snowy trail…

          frosty whiffs of breath


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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Carrie, congrats on your win with this very vivid haiku! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:30:00 PM
    an honest to GOODness haiku!! Congrats, lovely lady.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Carrie,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 3:38:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest, a lovely wintry snapshot :-)

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 3:10:00 PM
    This is so visual, Carrie. Gosh, both yours and mine could also work in the animal contest too, but I guess I better think of a new one. haha. Congrats here on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 11:17:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 5:35:00 AM
    Great one, Carrie. I especially liked the word punctuate! They do look like exclamation marks, don't they? :-) Congrats on the win(d). Hugs to you, Cyndi

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 2:59:00 PM
    very nice, Carrie! Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest. :) Catie

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 12:23:00 PM
    * “I Love This Precious Painting * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carrie * Allows Ones Imagination to Journey Through Its Canvas * Enchanting What They May Find * Brushing Colours & Angels * Or As Angels They Shall Be * Just Like You * Absolutely Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 11:45:00 AM
    Soup mail

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 6:26:00 AM
    You captured a lonely frigid scenario with this Haiku along with it's title, Carrie. Great job and good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:57:00 PM
    Great Haiku, Carrie. Love the imagery. Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:02:00 PM
    A special piece for the contest. I am sure it will do well in the ratings. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 5:44:00 PM
    This is a truly wonderful write...in a beautiful wonderland! I loved reading your write, awesome work!