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Excuse Me Miss

Excuse me Miss. Has anybody ever told you this? Hello. Hey There. I do not mean to stare. It's just that I noticed a few things you may or may not care. I really like your smile. When I'm in line at the store, you make the wait worthwhile. In fact, I saw glory when I first gazed upon your face. It was the very essence of amazing grace. Excuse me Miss. I don’t think you’re hearing this. What I saw had not one flaw. I was left in awe. I even dropped my jaw. When you came from behind the glass I got a glimpse of grade A class. On that note lest I cross the line - Please ,excuse me miss one more time. Sincerely, Larry J McMillan Jr. AKA

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  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:58:00 AM

    I once saw a woman so beautiful that I uncontrollably stood up when she came into the room. I married her. Tony

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:18:00 AM

    Wow! This is so beautifully crafted. You have so much skill and ability with your thoughts and pen. A lovely tale and very inspiring as well. Million thx for sharing And May God Bless!

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 10:30:00 AM

    I don't know why the title is left justified as shown instead of being centered with the body of the poem.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 9:54:00 AM

    Hi very nice, like it x

     Avatar Date: 11/8/2011 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.